At the risk of seeming obsessive, I couldn't wait to take the advice from Velda and Sandy on my last cards!! Here is the 2nd remake.... (the sentiment isn't blurry on the actual card!)
Here's the 'before' in case you missed it...
What do you think???
I think you got it! Looks great and makes a card that is really cohesive. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOh, yes! That flourish does the trick!
ReplyDeleteOutstanding!
ReplyDeleteGinnie you've done a great job creating a strong focal point by bring all the elements closer together. The darker swirl is excellent. My eye travels smoothly from the knot in the ribbon, up to the butterfly and swirls and over to the sentiment. The whole card design keeps the viewer nicely engaged. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteWow, the dark swirl makes such a difference. And I like the way it echoes the curvy sentiment lines. Very interesting to see all three cards. Thank you for sharing them!
ReplyDeleteWow!! I really liked the other one, but this one is fabulous!!
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